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SGA ficlet: This Is The Definition

  • Sep. 1st, 2006 at 10:07 AM
sga - shine on
Title: This Is The Definition
Rating: G
Word Count: 626
Summary: They were pushing northwest.
A/N: This is a stupid little Earthside vacation team fic, because I figured they gotta let Ronon and Teyla visit Earth at some point, although, really? I kinda think this is all in John's head.

This Is The Definition


The Oregon coast was an empty sprawl of white lined with lush hues of green, almost a mimic of the mainland. They were pushing northwest. For no reason other than it was up and away from Colorado Springs, and maybe they’d reach Canada before they had to turn around.

Rodney bitched about the motels, and Ronon compulsively watched the weather channel. And Rodney mocked Ronon for compulsively watching the weather channel, and then they ate tacos together. Or burgers and fries, fried chicken. Roast beef sandwiches. Theirs was a simple relationship.

Teyla took long walks to stretch her legs, and John didn’t worry.

They stopped for ice cream at almost every roadside stand. They stopped for hot dogs and chips. They stopped for beer. Good beer, mainly, though John wasn’t picky anymore.

Leaning back against the car door, arms crossed over his chest, grinning, John was so goddamn happy it seemed surreal. He thought it might’ve been a sign he was finally cracking; he’d never had so much fun on a road trip, crowded in a rented convertible with two aliens and, well. Rodney.

They were parked on the side of the road, two wheels in grit and gravel and weeds, and Ronon had the bottoms of his pants rolled up, calf-deep in the ocean shallows, an ice cream cone in each hand. The chocolate was melting past his fingers, faster than he could lick, and his shoulders were shaking with suppressed laughter, watching Rodney stomp in from where he’d gotten tackled by an enthusiastic wave.

Teyla was curled in the passenger seat behind him, fiddling with the radio, still fascinated after days with the array of music pouring out of the speakers. She liked Stevie Nicks. She liked Yes and The Kinks and Memphis Slim. She liked Nick Drake on long stretches of dark road, and they were all silent at Way to Blue, top down, inky humid night thick around them, stars distant pinpricks with hazy, clinging rings.

He pushed his sunglasses up his nose and called out, “Let’s go, kids,” and chuckled when Rodney rolled his eyes at him.

“This is fun for you, isn’t it?” he snapped, dripping all the way up the beach, sand coating the exposed skin of his legs. His blue t-shirt was plastered to his chest, outlining his nipples, his softly rounded belly. His cargo shorts were sagging below his knees.

“No wet clothes in the car,” John admonished cheerfully. He reached in and popped the trunk, and Rodney circled ‘round to the back, shucking his shirt unselfconsciously.

John watched with a contented half-smile.

Ronon bumped his shoulder with a sticky fist, one ice cream completely gone, the other already down to a leaky sugar cone. His jeans were splotched with it, the hems, slipping further down with each step, lying at mismatched levels against his ankles and narrow, bare feet.

Teyla’s wandering fingers paused in the middle of the Beach Boys, and Rodney slammed the trunk shut, striding back towards the front of the car with a towel and an absent, sweetly on-key, “I feel so broke up, I wanna go home.”

John arched an eyebrow at him.

“What?” He shrugged. “It’s catchy.”

Ronon finished off his ice cream with one big bite, and slid into the backseat behind Teyla, long legs bent, knees high, toes curling over the edge of the leather. He tipped his head back, dreads spilling over the polished red paint, eyes closed against the sun.

Rodney squeezed John’s arm as he passed, climbing in beside Ronon.

They had hours of daylight left. Then they’d have all the hours of the night, and John would drive for as long as he could, foot pressed even on the gas, fingers loose on the wheel.


Comments

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[info]wolfshark wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 02:45 pm (UTC)
Oh, what a lovely bit of team!fic.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:10 am (UTC)
*grins* thanks!
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[info]twilight_la_fae wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 02:48 pm (UTC)
*smiles* This is wonderful, Skoos. It has such a soft, wistful feel to it. You've got these guys spot on, you know.

This is the kind of dream John wakes up to and remembers what it's all about.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:11 am (UTC)
*g* thanks, hon!

This is the kind of dream John wakes up to and remembers what it's all about. yes, exactly :)
[info]elke_tanzer wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 02:52 pm (UTC)
Oh, this is beautiful! Not stupid at all. Thank you for posting it!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:13 am (UTC)
*g* thank you!
[info]veracity wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 03:06 pm (UTC)
Eeee! You posted it! Awesome. *grins* Wondered when you would. I loved it then and love it now. John's so squishy about his family. *pats the cutie on the head* They're so cute, especially Rodney scowling the water as it knocks him down. And Ronon and food, his own true love. Teyla's music obsession. She needs her own ipod. *grins*
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:14 am (UTC)
*g* thanks, m'dear! Yes, it took a while for me to post this, since I wasn't exactly sure I liked it very much :) Maybe because it's so different from my other stuff.

Teyla would love an ipod *nods*
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[info]etben wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 03:24 pm (UTC)
oh, how wonderful! This is - it's what I want for them, eventually, you know? I want them to get this, this moment of sunny, peacefuly togetherness. You write the team the way I see them, which is amazing and adorable and awwwwwwwwwww! *flails*

Plus, ice cream.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:16 am (UTC)
*grins* thank you! I was in a very squishy John mood when I wrote this, like this is what he sees for them somewhere in the future :)
[info]eleveninches wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 03:35 pm (UTC)
I feel like this is going to end in a drunken motel orgy.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:16 am (UTC)
oh my god, I hope so!
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[info]cottontail wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 03:35 pm (UTC)
That is the sweetest story! :)

I love to see John so happy becuase he has his little family with him and no one is in any danger.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:18 am (UTC)
*g* thank you!
[info]adler1013 wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 03:38 pm (UTC)
So. Wonderful. Pretty much perfect, actually, and it just improved my bad day by 500%. Thank you so much for posting this!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:19 am (UTC)
*beams* thank you, hon!
[info]gweneiriol wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 04:48 pm (UTC)
this is just beautiful. thanks for sharing!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:19 am (UTC)
*g* thank you!
[info]nunshavingfun wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 04:53 pm (UTC)
Wow. That is just so perfect. The team!!



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[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:20 am (UTC)
Eee! thank you! And also - AWESOME sign!
(no subject) - [info]nunshavingfun - Sep. 3rd, 2006 12:14 am (UTC) Expand
[info]littleleggylulu wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 04:58 pm (UTC)
Oh that was very lovely! Nice way to wake up!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:21 am (UTC)
*g* thanks, hon!
[info]ladybeth wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 05:30 pm (UTC)
This is cute. I can see this happening, especially Ronon standing in the water with two ice cream cones. I can also see them driving down the highway, Teyla sitting slanted in her seat with her feet out the window.:)
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:22 am (UTC)
*grins* thanks! I can just see them not wanting to stop, to keep driving as long as they can :)
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[info]tikiberry wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 05:30 pm (UTC)
Yeah. This is my happy fic.

*sighs happily*
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:23 am (UTC)
*grins* thanks! glad it gave you a smile :)
[info]chopchica wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 05:58 pm (UTC)
Awww, Rodney gets shotgun! I love, love, love.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:24 am (UTC)
*g* thank you!
[info]aurora_84 wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 07:06 pm (UTC)
*HAPPYSIGH*
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:24 am (UTC)
*grins* glad you liked!
[info]druidspell wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 08:55 pm (UTC)
Yes, Teyla totally strikes me as a Stevie Nicks fan. (Because I'm a fan as well, and Teyla seems like the type.)
*grins contentedly, wishing for ice cream* Yay.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:25 am (UTC)
*grins* mmmmmm, ice cream. glad you liked this, hon :)
[info]seratonation wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2006 11:49 pm (UTC)
Awwwww Happy John fic, there are never enough of those, and this was so sweet and cute >.<
"Theirs was a simple relationship." that was the best line, and It's all such a great picture, I just wanna hold it close and look at it whenever I'm down because awww *content sigh*
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:26 am (UTC)
*grins* thanks, my dear! Rodney, Ronon and food always goes together :)
[info]carta wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 12:18 am (UTC)
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:27 am (UTC)
*g* thanks :)
[info]20thcenturyvole wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:21 am (UTC)
Oh, every detail of this is so perfect - the sun, Ronon and icecream, Rodney and the enthusiastic wave (!), Teyla and the radio (!!), and John just getting to stand back and be totally, unexpectedly happy.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:29 am (UTC)
*beams* thank you! I love seeing John happy :)
[info]jade_dragoness wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:34 am (UTC)
*happy sigh* this fic is just so relaxing.

John's lack of tension bleeds through. There's no way he's worried. Not for his team, [they are on Earth] and not for himself [he has his team].

What a tasty treat to get after getting off work. Thank you!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 01:50 am (UTC)
*g* thank you! I just wanted to make everyone purely happy :)
[info]not_sally wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 02:53 am (UTC)
So totally happy, grin inducing, why can't the show be more like this? fic.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 05:31 pm (UTC)
*g* thank you!
[info]storm_petrel wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 03:49 am (UTC)
God, this reminds me why I love roadtrips.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 05:32 pm (UTC)
*g* thanks! glad you liked :)
[info]kelliem wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 04:12 am (UTC)
What a delicious painting. I was right there with them.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 05:32 pm (UTC)
*grins* thank you!
[info]bluelittlepig wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 06:55 am (UTC)
That was beautiful, cute, and sweet! It painted a portrait who they are and as together as a team. Love it!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 05:33 pm (UTC)
*g* thank you very much :)
[info]mirabile_dictu wrote:
Sep. 2nd, 2006 05:50 pm (UTC)
Just lovely! I'm going for a walk now, and I'm going to be imagining them on that beach. Thank you!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Sep. 4th, 2006 01:36 pm (UTC)
*g* thank you!
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....

“Oh god,” Carson groaned, hand over his eyes. “This wasna why I agreed to bleedin’ Wizard school. ‘You’ll have a grand time, son,’ says Da. ‘You’ll meet interestin’ folks,’ says Da. ‘Get you out from under your mum’s skirts for once,’ says Da. He didna mention homicidal Slytherins.”

Cadman patted his hand. “Carson—”

“Don’t you ‘Carson’ me, you daft Witch,” he growled. “You got me into this mess.”

- Bagglevarger's Theory of Inversive Magic

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