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SGA Ficlet: Those Days

  • Mar. 20th, 2006 at 1:30 PM
Ernie - MINE!
Title: Those Days
Word Count: 665
Summary: Naptimes, John decided, were very, very cool.
A/N: Er. So I woke up this morning and said to myself: Dude, you should write some sort of snapshot, fusion thingy about Ernie and the boys as kids, because that would be so super-sickeningly cute. Or something like that. So I took Ernie out of the furry octopus story and put him in a middle, missing... uh, thread? in What Happens in the Clubhouse. You kinda have to know both stories to get it. And, being a snapshot, this has no plot at all, and I wrote it in a very short span of time, so forgive any blatant errors.


Those Days


Ernie loved Rodney and liked John, and seemed to tolerate everyone else. Except for Ronon, of course, whose hair still warranted an extra happy greeting, and Radek, who always had the best pens.

His behavior didn’t change very much with their suddenly five-year-old appearances either, but his “mine” and “yours” sort of gained a tolerant, almost indulgent quality that made Rodney roll his eyes. He didn’t complain out loud, though, and John suspected he secretly liked having the furry octopus follow him around, voice-box flashing blue, a pen brandished in each free tentacle except the one twisted into the hem of his shirt.

*

It didn’t take long for Carson to prescribe mandatory napping, since John got sullen and sour when he was tired, and Rodney got loud and embarrassingly wet-eyed, and Ronon started biting. Larry, well. Larry was pretty much the same, but he’d fall asleep in weird places like the crosswalk above the jumper bay or underneath the filtration pumps by the kitchens, where no one would ever think to look. So after three days of Larry-hunts and an overabundance of curiously infected bite-related injuries, and publicly shedding enough tears for John to want to off himself, Carson and Elizabeth designated an hour each afternoon for naptime. And they didn’t care where they slept – except for Larry, who was escorted to his quarters each day before he could fold his really very flexible body into some sort of crawl-hole where nobody’d find him for hours – just so long as they came back well-rested and happy, and Rodney was especially pissy that he wasn’t allowed to have coffee. Ever.

John always slept in the sun-warmed clubhouse.

Where Rodney would nap was a toss-up between the clubhouse and his quarters, and sometimes when John climbed up through the hatch, he’d find him open-mouthed and whiffling snores, lying on his belly by the long bank of windows. Those times, he’d curl up next to him, tucking his head into the crook of Rodney’s neck, snaking an arm over his side, half-sprawled on top of him.

Other times, though, John would spread out in the spill of sunlight by himself, palms up and limbs wide.

Naptimes, John decided, were very, very cool.

*

Ernie didn’t like the clubhouse, didn’t like climbing the rope, didn’t like pulling himself up through the small hole in the ceiling, and he’d wait at the bottom and coo and bleat and shout, “Mine!” every time they opened the hatch. It was sort of pathetic and really annoying.

So they fashioned him a basket.

*

John made it a point of stopping by the labs before heading towards the clubhouse, just to make sure Rodney was obeying the napping dictate. Most times, Rodney was already gone.

Some days, though, Rodney fought off sleep tooth and nail, biting into his laptop with his fingers and stubbornly screaming, “Let go!” when Radek encircled his waist, hauling him backwards off his stool with strangely soft admonishments of, “You are making mistakes,” and, “You will kill us all with your brain,” and, “Do not make me call Elizabeth,” which normally got him moving, since Elizabeth was awkward and oddly uncomfortable around them, and that made Rodney awkward and uncomfortable.

Those days, John would follow Rodney as he stomped huffily towards the clubhouse, climbing the knotted rope one step ahead of him, and Ernie would clamber into his basket, breathing out puffs of “Yours” as John slowly pulled him up.

*

Some days, John’d find Ronon back-to-back with Rodney, Ernie snuggled up to their heads, tentacles wound in Ronon’s hair and draped loose along Rodney’s neck and jaw.

Those days, John would slowly wriggle in between the two boys, flopping onto his back to stare up at the low ceiling. And Ernie would chirp once or twice and pet his forehead until his eyes drifted shut, his cheek mashed against Rodney’s shoulder blade, reveling in the shift of bone and muscle and puppy fat as Rodney breathed deep, sleepy, even breaths.

Those days were John’s favorites.


Comments

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[info]tikiberry wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 10:50 am (UTC)
*flails*

It's so adorable! I am dead from the cute. It's exactly what I needed to cheer me up. Yay!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:31 am (UTC)
hee. thank you!
[info]smalldiver wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 10:59 am (UTC)
*Is dead from the cute*
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:32 am (UTC)
*buries you under mound of sugar*
[info]not_sally wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 11:37 am (UTC)
Diabetic-coma inducing. So cute.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:32 am (UTC)
*g* thanks!
[info]twilight_la_fae wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 11:38 am (UTC)
*points to self* Is ded with cuteness. There is something about an ickle John that is just so undeniably adorable.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:33 am (UTC)
There is something about an ickle John that is just so undeniably adorable. I know! I just want to hug him!
[info]abbylee wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 11:59 am (UTC)
So cute!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:33 am (UTC)
*g* thank you!
[info]hull1984 wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 12:18 pm (UTC)
Er...something beginning with 'c'...? I think you get the idea but well bugger it all - it's just so darn....yeh!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:33 am (UTC)
*grins* thanks!
[info]druidspell wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 12:59 pm (UTC)
HEEE! :D
*needs to find a synonym phrase for "dead from the cute!"*
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:34 am (UTC)
*grins* my teeth hurt from all the sugar :)
[info]shmanet_janet wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 01:02 pm (UTC)
*happy clapping*

ERNIE! hee!

and John is so right, napping is very, very cool.

i am literally dying from all teh fluffy adorable-ness.

Eeeee!

since Elizabeth was awkward and oddly uncomfortable around them, and that made Rodney awkward and uncomfortable.

*snort*
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:36 am (UTC)
*grins* You know Ernie's just so protective of them and everything, too, and makes sure they brush their teeth and stuff.
[info]nunshavingfun wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 01:28 pm (UTC)
I love you for writing this. Perfect! So CUTE!

And Larry? "Larry, well. Larry was pretty much the same, but he’d fall asleep in weird places like the crosswalk above the jumper bay or underneath the filtration pumps by the kitchens, where no one would ever think to look." I was like that as a kid. My mom STILL bitches about it. :D
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:37 am (UTC)
*grins* You and Larry = soulmates. *giggles* I'm giddy from all the fluff :)
(no subject) - [info]nunshavingfun - Mar. 21st, 2006 10:15 am (UTC) Expand
[info]civilbloodshed wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 01:46 pm (UTC)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!


*DEATH FLAIL*



You make me look so retarded. If you took a picture of the face I made while reading this, you could add a "thun-duh-uh" caption and complete the humiliation. *♥'s you*
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:38 am (UTC)
*laughs* You make me look so retarded. best compliment evah!
[info]jade_dragoness wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 02:06 pm (UTC)
*happy sniffles* They are so utterly CUTE!!!

This fic is like literary candy for my brain! *is approaching sugar high at mach 10*

OMG!!! Ernie and 5 years old Rodney and John! *flails* It's like adorable to the 75th power!

*adores fic*
*adores you*
*is dead of cute*

[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:38 am (UTC)
*grins* thank you! I couldn't help myself... they were all just so adorable in my head together :)
[info]devildoll wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 02:16 pm (UTC)
The clubhouse boys *and* Ernie!

This is my favorite day EVER.

*weeps with joy*
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:39 am (UTC)
Hee. Thanks, hon! Ernie makes everything better, and the boys are just darn cute :)
[info]rabbitwarren wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 02:21 pm (UTC)
YAY! A Skoosiepants story! And it was lovely and sweet. thanks!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:39 am (UTC)
*grins* thank you!
[info]sparkysparky wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 05:05 pm (UTC)
You kill me with the schmoop Skooz. Yes, you do. And I love it! And cry for more! This was so sweet and adorable and i LOVE Ernie and Kid!JohnnRodneynRonannLarry
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:41 am (UTC)
*grins* Thanks, darlin'!
[info]3jane wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 05:19 pm (UTC)
*implodes from the cute*

Ernie!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:42 am (UTC)
*grins* thank you! Ernie adds something good to everything... I should re-write all my fics with him in the background :)
[info]ceares wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 05:28 pm (UTC)
Aww! So cute. Also damn it! What is wrong with this country? We all need naps everyday. I'm writing my congressman!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:43 am (UTC)
*g* thanks!
We all need naps everyday. I'm writing my congressman! We need a napping lobbyist or something *nods*
[info]thepouncer wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 06:10 pm (UTC)
I think I've been remiss in leaving feedback on both the Ernie and Clubhouse stories, so this gives me a chance to tell you how much I enjoyed them. I don't normally think of myself as someone who likes kidfic, but you wrote them as real children with foibles, not sicky-sweet cherubs. And the touchign was so perfect for kids (avoiding any and all potential icky vibes - totally innocent and I appreciated that), as was the way they couldn't all adjust when they aged back to normal.

I love this snippet too - such a vivid snapshot of how the two stories could combine.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:45 am (UTC)
*g* thank you so much! glad you liked the fics, and Ernie, and the kids :)
[info]ellex42 wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 06:17 pm (UTC)
...frighteningly adorable...
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:45 am (UTC)
*g* thank you!
[info]dacey wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 06:19 pm (UTC)
*flails* ERNIE!!!! And KID!Team! My love for you is just out of control right now.

Okay, obviously you need an Ernie icon to use for occasions such as this. Or just because, you know...ERNIE!

You're not obligated, but if you'd like either of these, you can have your pick. I love them both, so I'll take whichever is left. You get dibs since Ernie is yours. : )

[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:48 am (UTC)
Oh! You! With the! and! *flails* You are so cool! Thank you! Um *wiffles* they are both awesome, but I think I'll take the full Ernie with the scrawled "Mine"
*hugs you* *runs off with Ernie*
(no subject) - [info]dacey - Mar. 22nd, 2006 05:12 pm (UTC) Expand
(no subject) - [info]skoosiepants - Mar. 23rd, 2006 05:38 am (UTC) Expand
[info]kellifer_fic wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2006 11:47 pm (UTC)
Rodney fought off sleep tooth and nail, biting into his laptop with his fingers and stubbornly screaming, “Let go!”

I just... *dies from the cuteness*
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 05:49 am (UTC)
*grins* why thank you :)
[info]allhoneyboo wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 06:04 am (UTC)
Aw! Very cute.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 10:03 am (UTC)
*g* thanks!
(Anonymous) wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 08:57 am (UTC)
I see Skoosie's version of Atlantis emerging from all this. You've created a completely parallel but alternate universe, which includes a furry octopus and the most adorable 5 year olds. And, for the record, I LOVE it. It's a fantastic blend.

--rags--
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 10:04 am (UTC)
hee. thanks, hon! *hugs you* all we need now is more pudding and pie :)
[info]c425cc33 wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 10:23 am (UTC)
No doubt this will be a great read, but I am dead from your icon!
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 22nd, 2006 10:05 am (UTC)
*g* [info]dacey made it for me :)
[info]kickthebeat wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 10:26 am (UTC)
GOD i love you.
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 22nd, 2006 10:05 am (UTC)
hee. thank you!
[info]ladyflowdi wrote:
Mar. 21st, 2006 10:45 am (UTC)
You should write clubhouse/Ernie fic forever, because SQUEE and WIBBLE and LOVE. Naptimes! Ernie's basket! Larry!!! Kids will find any nook and cranny to sleep in, the more tucked away, the better. ::grins::

Totally loved this :)
[info]skoosiepants wrote:
Mar. 22nd, 2006 10:06 am (UTC)
*grins* thank you!
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